Thesis essay 4

Whether that being a leader to expected some rules to be follow, but as an artist I’m allow to break some rules and create my own way, better then as a leader. 

Conclusion essay 3

Considering that these method are follow, being a student in this school will be easy depending how you are as a student. If it follow in another method, it could have some success or not depending if it benefit to that person education.  No matter what will happen to you in CHEC, you will always have something to remember this school, good and bad. If the first year of CHEC isn’t what you expect, you can always do better the next time.

Essay #2 What it's like

(To Professor Ankney, I apologize for not turning in the 1 rough draft on the due date)

With every hardship in everyone’s lives, we come face-to-face with the reality of threat. No matter the nice happy image that the media and children’s stories show about the world, cruelty and pain will come in some point of a person’s life. Witnessing cruelly in a school is enough to traumatize a young open minded student; but becoming a victim of bullying will experience the harsh reality of cruelty. Despite becoming a victim of cruelty to bullying, it sometimes can turn the victim into something great, like a strong leader or creative thinkers.

My own experience with bullying might be the same like other victims as well, some were verbal and a few physical bullying but I will always remember those event. I was in the 7th grade when I was bully, I was in a new environment all my close Elementary school friends went to their separate ways. I was alone and extreme shy. I don’t remember when, but I remember it took place in school, I recall every moment; they call me names and even threatened me for fun. Even using the word “Rape” as part of their “playful” action. Despite I ignore them, there was one I’ll always will remember these action by these so call “students”.

I remember it was in my fourth period class, some student who I don’t know, spray whiteboard cleaner on my hair and laugh. I was sitting there minding my business and drawing really terrible drawings. Some of the action was a blur, but I recall this moment even until today. That student took my backpack in front of me, I remember I ran up and force him to give it back while the other just yell and laugh. He never let go and I saw his facial expression, that look on his face was very playful and that smile, I wish I can knock him down to the ground for that unnecessary smile. It was too unpleasant for his action, I recall hitting him with a textbook and got my backpack back. I cry and yet no one help me, only there to wipe my tears off of my face. In that moment, life is cruel to me these people are clearly evil, barely any help by these teachers.

Depression came to me in that time, lock in my room and sobbing in my bed. In my mind I had a mix mental thought both suicide and murder. But yet somehow none of those action happen, instead I discover a new way to express myself. I discover drawing, it was fun to draw expression monster and people, despite it was fill with violence and swearing but it gave me happiness. As the years gone by with both improving my arts and less bullying, I discover art is my escape. No all victim will have the same turnaround like me, to me suicide will take away someone who could have potential creatively or even future leaders. As a former victim to bullying, I manage to discover my love and passion to art. If it wasn’t for that moment or my mind wasn’t clear enough, I wouldn’t become the person who I am today.

editing run on

*While the other words give a clear description on creating arts and have it to remember the terms in an creative manner.

*While the other words give a clear description on creating arts, also have it to remember the terms in an creative manner.

Another rough draft, mnemonics essay

From one of the worlds creative thinker, Albert Einstein have once said, "True art is characterized by an irresistible urge in the creative artist." Despite he isn't an artist, he does have a clear understanding on what it take to be an creative artist to have a urge to express. While evaluating Einstein's quotes, connect to visual art and even both musical and literature art. To actually to do the basic art, you must know about the Element of Art; Line,shape,form,space,value,texture, and color. If you find yourself having to remember the Element of Art; always remember "Like shopping for special violins to charities."

The device being use here, I use the first letter of the vocab words in order and create a sentence with it. Creating this device, I have to make it in the relation to the art. Using the keyword "violins" in relation to the word "value", I have given a connection about the arts. While the other words give a clear description about the sentence and have it in connection to the arts.The whole sentence itself, I have shown creativity and have think like a actual artist.

Expressing yourself is also critical when having to work on a piece of art. Part of the Element of Art. When you have to create a piece of art, you have to think and imagine the structure of the work. Thinking like a creative artist how Albert Einstein describe, believe in a good work of art is done by having a mind like a creative artist.

Even if I written my essay with Albert Einstein’s idea about an creative artist, I wrote it in the perspective as an actual artist. Using and creating a structure about the Element of Art, I have think like an creative artist. As a creative person, I have to think of a devices with the relation and meaning of the Element of Art to show creativity. Making a mnemonics structure take lots of creatively and have to be artist to create a mnemonics devices that work best to remember.  

Conclusion paragraph

Even if I written my essay with Albert Einstein’s idea about an creative artist, I wrote it in the perspective as an actual artist. Using and creating a structure about the Element of Art, I have think like an creative artist. As a creative person, I have to think of a devices with the relation and meaning of the Element of Art to show creativity. Making a mnemonics structure take lots of creatively and have to be artist to create a mnemonics devices that work best to remember.  

First draft

From one of the worlds creative thinker, Albert Einstein have once said, "True art is characterized by a irresistible urge in the creative artist." Despite he isn't an artist, he dose have a clear understanding on what it take to be an creative artist to have a urge to express. While evaluating Einstein's quotes, connect to visual art and even both musical and literature art. To actually to do the basic art, you must know about the Element of Art; Line,shape,form,space,value,texture, and color. If you find yourself having to remember the Element of Art; always remember "Like shopping for special violins to charities."

The device being use here, I use the first letter of the vocab words in order and create a sentence with it. Creating this device, I have to make it in the relation to the art. Using the key word "violins" in relation to the word "value", I have given a connection about the arts. While the other words give a clear description about the sentence and have it in connection to the arts.