From one of the worlds creative thinker, Albert Einstein have once said, "True art is characterized by a irresistible urge in the creative artist." Despite he isn't an artist, he dose have a clear understanding on what it take to be an creative artist to have a urge to express. While evaluating Einstein's quotes, connect to visual art and even both musical and literature art. To actually to do the basic art, you must know about the Element of Art; Line,shape,form,space,value,texture, and color. If you find yourself having to remember the Element of Art; always remember "Like shopping for special violins to charities."
The device being use here, I use the first letter of the vocab words in order and create a sentence with it. Creating this device, I have to make it in the relation to the art. Using the key word "violins" in relation to the word "value", I have given a connection about the arts. While the other words give a clear description about the sentence and have it in connection to the arts.
I believe you made a grammatical error in your quote: "an" not "a irresistible." I will resist other errors in here, for now, but that one needed to be caught because a writer never wants to misquote. We tend to overlook what we quoted when editing....
ReplyDeleteMore importantly for now, you have a really rough transition between the quote and the idea of "the urge" and "the evaluation of art," which has nothing to do with urge. One is about having the desire to express while the other one is about having the fundamental knowledge of how to do so. You need to make that distinction much clearer. Just because both are on the topic of art, they are not currently on the same subject matter within that topic! The easiest thing for you to do now would be to try and explain the difference between passion and knowledge, kind of like I just did for you.
As I said in class, your device is great. I would acknowledge in the intro that you're phrase is an acrostic mnemonic device. Otherwise, the outside reader isn't quickly clear on how those elements fit in the sentence.